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What it is to love? For Elize by ~Heaven-CanWait:iconHeaven-CanWait:



Softly, ever so softly,
the piano is played,
by a soul, gotten lost in the music,
in every single note,
in the sound of its beauty.

        how elegant a piano is, when
        keys pretend to be your spine and
        my fingers play the
                lucid movements,
                reaching your heart and
                stealing a part so that you can never
                leave me.

I get up,
floating almost soundless
across the room.
        back to you,
                beautiful words, I thought
                weren't meant to be said because they sounded
                so untrue.
                piece of strength we both thought we never had, and
                all those particles, violin strings of shifting existences
                we played the same music.
        where I belong...

A rose, so delicate,
almost brittles under my touch,
as I lay it upon the piano
and watch you smile
like an angel.
But I don't care any more,
already moving to the melody,
mesmerized by the sound,
letting my feet take control,
and just let it embrace me.

Dancing,
this is my soul,
this is my destiny
this is us..

        To move to the rhythm,
        to forget the world,
        moving in circles,
        feeling your fingers,
        draw little patterns on my shoulder,
        holding my waist tight,
        and your gaze holding mine.

When we're like this
it's like gasoline and  a match,
ending up as an open fire,
a dangerous beauty,
you cannot resist to watch
because losing control,
is just so tempting,
while forgetting
what it meant altogether.

        sometimes, meanings are unnecessary. just let it flow,
        and watch the beautiful patterns.

        that is love,
        as you taught me.
:iconheaven-canwait:

Author's Comments

    Another collab with the dear Duywu [ =falathiel ] who did an awesome job once again!

    (Here's her submission. Pls :+fav: & comment as well! [link])

    Anyway, this is a very belaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaated birthday present to our cute angelfriend Elize [ *MataHari7 ] who we couldn't stand having celebrated her birthday without getting a present from us!

    So here you go honey! Just for you. We know you love dancing! :heart:

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:iconunderworldriver:
This is wonderful! :clap:

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~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
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Remember we all have =RawEm0tion :blackrose:
I am a proud member of ~lyriclub B-)
:iconnuisance15:
Beautiful as always. :)
:hug:
~M

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~Merryde Anne Tavora~

I can do all things through Him who strengthens me Philippians 4:13

R.I.P. Steven Taylor Riles 1989-2008
R.I.P. Steven Riles Beloved father...

~Merryde Anne Tavora~
:iconheaven-canwait:
Thank you! =D

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    And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music ♥

    =RawEm0tion - Curious?
:iconheaven-canwait:
Thanks! =)

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    And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music ♥

    =RawEm0tion - Curious?
:iconunderworldriver:
you're welcome hon.

--
~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
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Remember we all have =RawEm0tion :blackrose:
I am a proud member of ~lyriclub B-)
:iconmatahari7:
ok, lol im gonna write this for both of u, baby girls^^ :D
really, really, really the best birthday present i got*** and im not just saying that :heart: i dont think ive ever read a poem i loved this much: for what it means, for what it reminds me of, for the fact that was made by u girls :iconbackhug:
u two understood my essence and my soul, and wrote it beautifly with these words that reach me and touch my heart *sure im crying now lol u two know me lol* and i still cant believe i was able to find now one, but two girls so wonderfull, im proud to call my sisters and my friends.
i could never thank u girls enough, but please know how much i love the two of u, and care for u girls :heart: thank u so much!!!!

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"Crystallized, as I lay here and rest
Eyes of glass stare directly at death
From deep sleep I have broken away
No one knows, no one hears what I say"
:iconirrevocablefate:
Gorgeous dear, simply lovely. ♥♥

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Hello world! I love you. :eager:
:iconyushinmaru:
Wonderful! :D So creative! ^^
:iconmakola94:
you have been featured here:[link]
:heart:

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I write and take pictures.
yea, i'm planning immortality.
perhaps it'll happen.

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