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Give me thy flare,
to cast out obstinancy, and
lead me to insight of
what eyes troubled could not see;
videlicet betrayal hidden for long.
Wind, I call thee, to send my wings to freedom.

Give me thy blistering heat, to not
let the spark in my heart fade away,
let the flames begin, so that
I won´t have to let go of my desires,
burning inside, not to regret anything at all.
Fire, I call thee, to light up my chosen path.

Give me thy strength, to wash away
pain and despair felt for too long,
not drowning anymore now,
but adrifting in the belief,
to reach distances, unapproachable before.
Water, I call thee, to flow with me!

Give me thy might, so that I can
rely on you, no matter when, where or why.
If I ever stumble for making mistakes,
let me hit the ground softly and smooth,
so I can carry on without aching heart.
Earth, I call thee, to support me!  

Give me thy faith in myself,
Not wanting to fight with myself,
I need to accept,
what can not be changed,
and see the world through sincere eyes of mine.
Spirit, I call thee to free courage in me!

I call to thee . . . ,
blessed be.
©2008-2009 ~Heaven-CanWait
:iconheaven-canwait:

Author's Comments

. . . something I wrote tonight, took me about an hour to eventually get it like this. It was inspired by the House of Night Series {I actually read Betrayed, the 2nd novel} which is absolutely addictive!

I would like to hear what you think about it, ´coz this is something I made up my mind for and not just a random poem, . . . ♥ I especially hope I didn´t make much mistakes.


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© 2007- 2008 ~Heaven-CanWait
All rights reserved. Do not use/ redistribute my work without my written expressed permission.
I do not own the image shown above, though.

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:iconsegacia:
Yay yay! Nice job! :love:

I love it.

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No matter how the wind howls, the mountain cannot bow to it.
:iconmissthursday:
I like that, It was very nice to read :)
:iconfrenchfox:
Your are really an amazing girl ! you use English words that I do not even know! :D
But your words are very poetic and I love your use of vital items for conveying of your emotions! ;)
:iconmatahari7:
this is very nice hun!!! very beautiful writing!!! :heart:

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"Crystallized, as I lay here and rest
Eyes of glass stare directly at death
From deep sleep I have broken away
No one knows, no one hears what I say"
:iconheaven-canwait:
:excited: Outch!
Should stop jumping around out of excitement, hitting the ceiling too easily

(I know I´m a dork, yup) :hug: Thank you soooooo much!

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    And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music ♥

    =RawEm0tion - Curious?
:iconheaven-canwait:
To be honest? I can´t say anything :D I keep smiling all the time. I´m just happy reading this with its approval. Thanks!

Glad it made sense to anybody at all haha, I was really worried.

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    And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music ♥

    =RawEm0tion - Curious?
:iconheaven-canwait:
Glad to hear that :hug: thanks!

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    And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music ♥

    =RawEm0tion - Curious?
:iconheaven-canwait:
:hug: owww thanks!

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    And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music ♥

    =RawEm0tion - Curious?
:iconyushinmaru:
Yay! Keep up the good work! :D :D :D

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